Hirst AcademyPostgraduate Pathway: Business and Marketing Foundations
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Module 5

Writing Business Reports

Estimated time: 5–6 hours · Shows you how to turn your analysis into a report that earns marks for analysis and evaluation, not just description.

Most postgraduate marketing and business courses are assessed through a written report or plan, and many employers make decisions the same way. Learners rarely lose marks for a lack of ideas; they lose them for describing instead of analysing, for weak structure, for claims without evidence and for careless referencing. By the end of this module you'll be able to explain what postgraduate assessors look for; structure a business report from executive summary to appendices; write evidence-led paragraphs and recommendations a decision-maker can act on; reference sources in Harvard style following Cite Them Right (Pears and Shields, 2025); use AI tools openly within your institution's rules; and edit a draft until it is ready to submit. The running case is Kettle & Crumb, where Dan Whitfield now has to turn his analysis into a report for Maria Costa.

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5.1

What Assessors Look For: Description, Analysis and Evaluation

A postgraduate assessor is not marking how much you know about a case or topic; they are marking what you do with it. The UK's qualification frameworks set out what a master's degree (level 7) should show (QAA, 2024). In plain words, and as our own gloss: you understand current problems in your field critically, you deal with complex issues both systematically and creatively, you make sound judgements when the data is incomplete, and you explain your conclusions clearly to specialists and non-specialists alike. Business reports test exactly these things, because a manager rarely has complete data either.

Three kinds of writing sit behind every mark. Description says what is: the facts, the figures, what a source says. Analysis explains why it is so and what it means: it connects facts, finds causes and shows how one thing affects another. Evaluation judges: which evidence is strongest, which option is better on the criteria you set, what the weaknesses are and what should be done. You need some description, because a reader needs the facts in front of them, but at postgraduate level it earns little on its own. Most marks go to analysis and evaluation.

The quickest way to move up is to ask "so what?" of your own sentences. A sentence that only reports a figure is description. Ask "so what does this mean?" and the answer is analysis. Ask "so what should we conclude, or do?" and the answer is evaluation. A good paragraph often contains all three, in that order, with most of its words in the last two.

Read the marking rubric before you write, not after. A rubric is the table that tells you what each grade band looks like and how the marks are split between criteria. Look first at its command words. "Describe" asks for an accurate account; "analyse" asks you to break something down and explain how its parts work; "evaluate" or "critically evaluate" asks for a judgement backed by evidence; "recommend" asks you to choose and say what should happen. Then read the top band and underline what it asks for that the middle band does not. Words such as "critical", "justified" and "well-evidenced" usually appear there. Those differences are your checklist while you write.

Learning ObjectiveExplain what postgraduate assessors look for, and rewrite a descriptive paragraph first as analysis and then as evaluation.
Key ConceptsMaster's-level (level 7) expectations in plain words, our gloss on QAA (2024); description, analysis and evaluation; the "so what?" question; making sound judgements when data is incomplete; reading a marking rubric and its command words (describe, analyse, evaluate, recommend).
Practical ExampleDescription: "Kettle & Crumb's March 2026 survey had 412 responses, and 58% of respondents visit weekly or more." Analysis: only loyalty-app members were asked, so the figure describes loyal customers, not the new customers a Hillsborough café would need. Evaluation: the survey cannot support Option A's demand forecast on its own, and the report should say so.
ExerciseRead the worked example later in this module first, to see Dan's analysis paragraph before and after. Then take one descriptive paragraph you have written about your own decision, or a past employer's or a business you plan. If you have none, use this Kettle & Crumb sentence: "Revenue grew from £1,620,000 in FY2024/25 to £1,800,000 in FY2025/26, and operating profit was £90,000 (5.0% of revenue)." Write three labelled versions of no more than 80 words each: description, analysis and evaluation.
5.2

The Shape of a Business Report

A business report is written for a decision-maker who is busy, may read only the first page and needs to act. That shapes everything about it. An essay builds an argument in flowing prose and usually ends with its conclusion; a report puts its main findings and recommendation first, divides the content into numbered sections with headings, and lets each reader go straight to the part they need. Many postgraduate assessments ask for a report precisely because it tests whether you can write for that reader.

Most business reports use a version of this structure. The title page gives the title, who it is for, who wrote it and the date. The executive summary is a short, stand-alone version of the whole report: its purpose, key findings, recommendation and main risk, written for someone who reads nothing else. It usually comes to around a tenth of the word count and is written last. The introduction states the purpose, the decision question, the scope (what the report covers and what it leaves out) and how the report is organised. The analysis sets out what the evidence shows, section by section, with the evidence judged as you learnt in Module 3. The options section compares the realistic choices against your criteria. Conclusions and recommendations state what you conclude and what should be done; implementation and risks says how, by when, at what cost and what could go wrong. The references list every source cited, and the appendices hold the detail: full calculations, survey questions, raw counts.

Number the headings (1, 1.1, 1.2) so readers and markers can find their way. Each section should do one job, and its heading should say what that job is: "3. Demand evidence for Option A" tells the reader more than "3. Discussion". Keep anything the reader must see to follow the argument in the main text. An appendix supports the argument but cannot make it, because many markers read appendices only to check, and some do not count or mark them at all.

Before writing a word of prose, set a word budget. Give the analysis and options the largest share, because that is where analysis and evaluation earn marks, and keep the introduction and conclusion short. Always follow your assignment brief where it asks for a different structure: the shape above is a strong default, not a rule.

Learning ObjectiveStructure a business report with the sections a decision-maker and a marker expect, and say what each section must do.
Key ConceptsTitle page; executive summary; introduction (purpose, scope and the decision question); analysis; options; conclusions and recommendations; implementation and risks; references; appendices; numbered headings; reports versus essays; a word budget for each section; what belongs in an appendix.
Practical ExampleDan's report for Maria is about 2,000 words and due on Friday 30 October 2026. His decision question from Module 3 becomes the introduction's purpose, his scored sources feed the analysis, the two growth options get a section of their own, and his detailed calculations go in an appendix, with the key results in the main text.
ExerciseFor your own decision (or Kettle & Crumb's growth decision), write a report skeleton: numbered headings, one line under each saying what that section will say, and a word budget for each section that adds up to your word limit (use 2,000 words if you have none).
5.3

Writing That Argues

Good report writing argues. Each paragraph should make one point and back it, and a simple pattern helps: point, evidence, explanation, link. The point is the paragraph's first sentence, the topic sentence, and states what the paragraph claims. The evidence gives the figure, finding or source that supports it, with a citation. The explanation is your reasoning: why the evidence supports the point, and what limits it. The link connects the point back to the decision question or on to the next paragraph. It is the explanation that turns description into analysis, so give it at least as many words as the evidence.

Signposting guides a busy reader. Headings show the route; topic sentences show where each paragraph is going; linking words show the relationship between ideas: "however" for a contrast, "as a result" for a consequence, "by contrast" for a comparison. A reader who reads only your topic sentences should still be able to follow the argument.

Match the strength of your language to the strength of your evidence. This is called hedging, and it is a skill, not a weakness. "The survey proves customers want our bakes in farm shops" claims too much from 412 loyal customers; "the survey suggests some loyal customers would buy our bakes in a farm shop" claims what the evidence supports. Words such as "suggests", "indicates", "on this evidence" and "if the forecast holds" show a marker that you know how far your evidence goes. Don't hedge everything, though: where the arithmetic is certain, state it plainly.

Write in concise British business English. Prefer short sentences, one idea in each. Prefer the active voice ("Kettle & Crumb would need a second deck oven") to the passive ("a second deck oven would be needed"), because it shows who acts. Cut words that add nothing: "in order to" becomes "to". Check whether your assignment allows the first person ("I recommend"); many business reports do, and some institutions prefer the third person.

Recommendations need the most care. A recommendation a decision-maker can act on says who should do what, by when, and why, and where it matters at what cost. "Consider growth options" is a wish; "commit to Option B by a named date, subject to a stated condition" is a decision. Every recommendation should follow from your analysis: if a reader asks "where did that come from?", the answer should be a section of your report. Finally, keep every figure consistent: a number in the text must match its appendix and the executive summary, rounded the same way each time.

Learning ObjectiveWrite evidence-led analysis paragraphs, and a recommendation that says who should do what, by when and why.
Key ConceptsParagraph structure: point, evidence, explanation, link; topic sentences; signposting; cautious language (hedging) in proportion to the evidence; concise British business style; recommendations that name who, what, by when and why; keeping figures in the text consistent with the appendix.
Practical ExampleWeak: "Kettle & Crumb should look into Hillsborough further." Actionable: "Dan should keep counting footfall at the Hillsborough site on weekdays and Saturdays for a year, and report the results to Maria in autumn 2027, before Kettle & Crumb commits £180,000 to a fit-out, because two days of counts cannot show a year's trade."
ExerciseRead the worked example later in this module first, to see how Dan rewrites an analysis paragraph. Then write two analysis paragraphs of up to 150 words each on your own decision, each following point, evidence, explanation and link. Finish with one recommendation that names who, what, by when and why. Kettle & Crumb fallback: write one paragraph on Option B's numbers (profit £22,000 a year, payback about 1.1 years, Peak Pantry 35.6% of wholesale revenue) and one on the Peak Pantry buyer's unsourced "up 30%" claim.
5.4

Referencing and Academic Integrity

Referencing does two jobs. It gives credit to the people whose work you use, and it lets your reader check your evidence. In Harvard style, an author–date system, each source is cited briefly in the text, as (Blakeslee, 2004), and listed in full in an alphabetical reference list at the end. Harvard style varies a little between institutions, so check which version yours uses. Many UK universities follow Cite Them Right (Pears and Shields, 2025), now in its 13th edition, and this module's examples follow it too.

A quotation repeats an author's exact words in quotation marks, with the page number in the citation: (QAA, 2024, p. 24). Use quotations sparingly, where the exact wording matters. A paraphrase puts the idea in your own words and sentence structure, and it still needs a citation, because the idea is still someone else's. Changing a few words of the original while keeping its structure is neither: it is close copying, and it can count as plagiarism.

Business reports often rely on sources that were never published. Cite Them Right treats unpublished internal documents as a reference-list entry ending with the word "Unpublished": the author or organisation, the year, the title in single quotation marks, then the organisation. Personal communications, such as an email or a conversation, are cited in the text with the sender and year. Cite Them Right also gives a reference-list format, but because a reader cannot trace them, many institutions leave them out: check yours, and ask permission before you quote someone.

Academic integrity means doing your own work honestly: acknowledging every source, working alone unless collaboration is allowed, and never presenting someone else's work, or a tool's, as your own. Plagiarism is the failure to acknowledge, as in copying without a citation or close paraphrase; buying or sharing work, and reusing your own assessed work without permission, are also misconduct.

The same applies to generative AI tools. The rules on using them in assessed work differ between institutions and they change often, so follow your institution's current policy and your assignment brief. Where use is allowed, two habits keep you safe. Check every fact and reference an AI tool gives you against the original source, and cite that source, not the tool. Say openly what you used it for in a short AI-use statement, for example: "I used [tool] to suggest a structure for section 2 and to check grammar. All analysis, figures and sources are my own and were checked against the originals." Where a tool's output appears in your report, Cite Them Right includes formats for referencing AI-generated material, though institutions differ on whether they want it in the reference list.

Learning ObjectiveCite and reference sources accurately in Harvard style following Cite Them Right, and use generative AI tools openly within your institution's rules.
Key ConceptsHarvard author–date citations and an alphabetical reference list (Pears and Shields, 2025); page numbers for quotations; quotation versus paraphrase; referencing unpublished internal data and personal communications; plagiarism; generative AI used within your institution's current policy, checked and acknowledged; an AI-use statement; local variations in Harvard style.
Practical ExampleA quotation with its citation: master's graduates should be able to "make sound judgements in the absence of complete data" (QAA, 2024, p. 24). In the reference list: QAA (2024) The Frameworks for Higher Education Qualifications of UK Degree-Awarding Bodies. 2nd edn. Available at: https://www.qaa.ac.uk/docs/qaa/quality-code/the-frameworks-for-higher-education-qualifications-of-uk-degree-awarding-bodies-2024.pdf (Accessed: 14 October 2026).
ExerciseWrite a correct Harvard reference list of five sources for your report, with one in-text citation for each, and a short AI-use statement of up to 60 words saying which tools you used, for what, and how you checked the output (or that you used none). Kettle & Crumb fallback: reference Dan's survey and footfall counts, the published source you found in Module 3, Osterwalder and Pigneur (2010) and Blakeslee (2004).
5.5

Editing, Checking and Using Feedback

A first draft gets the argument down; editing makes it readable and correct. Leave time for it: a day between drafting and editing lets you read what you wrote rather than what you meant to write. Edit in passes, from the big picture to the small print, because there is no point polishing a sentence in a section you are about to cut.

Start with structure. Reverse outline the draft: list the topic sentence of every paragraph on a separate page. If the list does not read as a clear argument, move, merge or cut paragraphs until it does. Then write the executive summary, last, when you finally know what the report says.

Next, cut to the word limit. Check what your institution counts; reference lists and appendices are often excluded, while tables and headings vary. Cut description before analysis, repetition before evidence, and long phrases before ideas. If you are still over, ask whether every section earns its share of your word budget. Few markers reward a report that is well over the limit, and some stop reading at it.

Then check every number and claim. Recalculate each figure from its inputs, and compare it with the appendix and the executive summary. Round the same way everywhere, and say when a figure is rounded. Make sure each claim has a citation, and each citation an entry in the reference list. Numbers are where readers lose trust fastest: one wrong total makes them doubt every other figure.

Proofread last, one issue at a time: spelling, then punctuation, then consistency of terms and headings. Reading aloud slows you down enough to hear missing words, and changing the font or printing the draft helps you see it afresh. A spell-checker will not catch "from" for "form", or a misspelt name.

Finally, use feedback. Feedback on this assignment explains your mark; feed-forward is what you carry into the next one. When you get comments, sort them into two groups: those about this report only and those about your habits, such as description where analysis was needed, or missing page numbers in quotations. The second group is worth more. Write your top two habits at the top of your next draft and check for them before you submit. The Report Readiness Checklist (Report Readiness Checklist) turns these checks into a list you can work through, and shows what to fix first.

Learning ObjectiveEdit a draft to its word limit, check every number and claim, and act on feedback before you submit.
Key ConceptsWriting the executive summary last; cutting to a word limit; reverse outlining (reading only the topic sentences); proofreading one issue at a time; checking every number against its source and its calculation; rounding consistently; feedback and feed-forward; the Report Readiness Checklist.
Practical ExampleDan checks Option A's payback, from Module 4, against his appendix: £180,000 ÷ £44,200 = 4.07, which he reports as about 4.1 years everywhere. He finds "about 36%" in one section and "35.6%" in another for Peak Pantry's share of wholesale revenue, and uses 35.6% in both.
ExerciseRead the worked example's two executive summaries again. Then write your own executive summary last, in no more than 200 words (about a tenth of a 2,000-word report): purpose, key findings, recommendation and the main risk. Check the whole draft in the Report Readiness Checklist (Report Readiness Checklist) and fix the top three items on its list. Kettle & Crumb fallback: check the skeleton, paragraphs and reference list you wrote in this module's earlier lessons.
Worked Example

Dan Turns His Analysis into a Report for Maria

Dan's report for Maria is about 2,000 words and due on Friday 30 October 2026.

Executive summary, first draft. "Kettle & Crumb has three cafés and a wholesale line. This report looks at two options, a café in Hillsborough and a contract with Peak Pantry. Both are described below, followed by a conclusion." This is pure description: it gives no findings, no recommendation and no risk.

Executive summary, revised. "How should Kettle & Crumb grow over the next three years? This report compares a fourth café in Hillsborough (Option A) with a wholesale contract with Peak Pantry (Option B). Option A needs a £180,000 fit-out; on a forecast of 1,500 transactions a week it would make £44,200 in its first year and pay back in about 4.1 years, with a margin of safety of 16.7%. Option B needs £25,000; it would make £22,000 a year and pay back in about 1.1 years, with a margin of safety of 36.7%. I recommend Option B as the first step, because it puts far less money at risk. The main risk is dependence: Peak Pantry would provide 35.6% of wholesale revenue, and its demand claim is unsourced." Dan treats the recommendation as provisional and rewrites the summary last.

Analysis paragraph, before. "I counted 2,150 passers-by at the Hillsborough site on Saturday 12 September 2026 and 1,380 on Tuesday 15 September 2026. The café would need 1,250 transactions a week to break even."

After. "The demand evidence for Option A is thin. Counts between 8am and 2pm found 2,150 passers-by on a Saturday but 1,380 on a Tuesday (Whitfield, 2026). Passers-by are not customers, and two days cannot show a year's trade, yet the café needs 1,250 transactions a week to break even against a forecast of 1,500. With a margin of safety of only 16.7%, weaker weekday trade could erase its profit, so Option A carries the greater demand risk." The facts are the same; the point, explanation and judgement are new.

Reference list.

Kettle & Crumb Ltd (2026) 'Customer survey of loyalty-app members, March 2026'. Kettle & Crumb Ltd. Unpublished.

Whitfield, D. (2026) 'Footfall counts at the Hillsborough site, 12 and 15 September 2026'. Kettle & Crumb Ltd. Unpublished.

The Peak Pantry buyer's email is a personal communication. Following common practice, Dan cites it in the text only, as (Peak Pantry, 2026), and asks the buyer's permission before quoting it.

Knowledge Check

  1. A student's report says: "Option B's set-up cost is £25,000 and Option A's fit-out is £180,000." What would turn this sentence into evaluation?
    A judgement about what the difference means for the decision, for example that Option B puts far less money at risk, so it scores better on the up-front investment criterion; the sentence as written only describes two figures the reader already has.
  2. Maria may read only the executive summary. Why is Dan's first draft, which named the two options and promised a conclusion, not fit for that reader?
    An executive summary must stand alone, and the draft gives no findings, no recommendation and no risk, so a reader who stops there has nothing to act on; the revised version gives the purpose, the key figures, a recommendation and the main risk.
  3. Dan's full break-even and payback calculations run to many lines. Where should they go in his report?
    In an appendix, with the key results (such as break-even at 1,250 transactions a week and a 16.7% margin of safety for Option A) in the main text, because the argument must be readable without the appendix and many markers only check appendices rather than mark them.
  4. A draft says: "The survey proves that customers want to buy our bakes in farm shops." How should it be rewritten, and why?
    In proportion to the evidence, for example "the survey suggests that some loyal customers would buy our bakes in a farm shop", because only loyalty-app members were asked and a survey of 412 of them cannot prove what all customers, or Peak Pantry's shoppers, want.
  5. Your institution allows AI tools for some tasks, and a chatbot gives you a statistic on UK bakery sales with a reference. What should you do before using the statistic?
    Find and read the original source to check that it exists and says what the chatbot claims, then cite that source, not the chatbot, and mention the tool in your AI-use statement, because AI tools can misreport figures and invent references.
  6. Recall the CRAAP test from Module 3. Which of Dan's three case sources would a marker most likely challenge, and why?
    The Peak Pantry buyer's email, because its "up 30%" claim has no source, period or base, so it fails on accuracy, and it was written to win a contract, so it fails on purpose; Dan should say so in the text rather than lean on it.

Resources & Further Practice

  • The referencing guide this module follows: Pears, R. and Shields, G. (2025) Cite Them Right: The Essential Referencing Guide, 13th edn, London: Bloomsbury Academic — Harvard and other styles with examples for every kind of source, including unpublished documents and AI-generated material; many university libraries also subscribe to its online version, Cite Them Right Online (citethemrightonline.com).
  • What a master's degree should show: QAA (2024) The Frameworks for Higher Education Qualifications of UK Degree-Awarding Bodies, 2nd edn, February 2024, free at qaa.ac.uk/docs/qaa/quality-code/the-frameworks-for-higher-education-qualifications-of-uk-degree-awarding-bodies-2024.pdf — section 4.17 is the master's (level 7) descriptor this module puts into plain words.
  • A one-page report structure: Aberystwyth University Skills Hub, How to Write a Business Report, a free guide at aber.ac.uk/en/media/departmental/skillshub/how-to-write-a-business-report.pdf — a short summary of the standard sections, including writing the executive summary last.
  • Your own institution's rules: before you write an assessed report, read your university's referencing guide, its academic-integrity policy and its current guidance on generative AI, and your assignment brief; where they differ from this module, they take precedence.
  • Further practice: run your capstone draft through the Report Readiness Checklist (Report Readiness Checklist) before you submit it, and use the structure and executive summary you drafted here in Module 6.
Checkpoint

Reflect on Your Report Writing

  • What I drafted: name the report you planned, and list the artefacts you made, such as the skeleton, the paragraphs, the reference list, the AI-use statement and the executive summary (or use a past role, a course or a business you plan, if you are not working now).
  • What I learnt: name the habit you most need to change (description, structure or referencing) and the moment in this module when you noticed it.
  • What I'll do differently: write the one thing you will do differently in your first postgraduate assignment, and when in the writing process you will do it.